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Woodland Desire by ~something44:iconsomething44:



Desire for woodland pastures
Among the emerald leaves
Of a great tree soaring
Up high the mountaintop,
Where a dream of longing
Deprive a loner’s cry

Of passion. Green atmosphere,
Where this road towards the top
Will have to endure,
Believing to ensure
A hermit’s lifestyle,
Engaging

In this steep climb
Upwards the sky
Scourging woods across
This vast land,
Prowling towards
The barren side
Of the mountain,

Where trees rarely grow
Up the river’s flow
Towards the life
Inhaling to inspire,
A woodland desire.
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Where were you when the trees were growing up?

A random poem I made during my retreat a few weeks back. I forgot to upload this one. Totally random, I just started writing when I saw the barren side of the mountain up the ranges of Cavite.

St. Scholastica Center of Spirtuality, Tagaytay
February 2, 2008
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Ok...wow.You're a truely deep person.Sweeet poem.
Lovely =)

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How beautiful ^^ you give me such rich imagery.
I adore the imagery in this poem. Brilliant.

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Haha. Thank you. ^^,

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Some people say they haven't yet found themselves. But the self is not something one finds; it is something one creates.
Thanks! glad you think of it is such. :)

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good job, a very enjoyable piece, wonderful imagery
yup, I love it :)

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