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Please don’t let me
sleep, tonight
in the cold dark
wishing, you were here
when I’m scarred from
staring at you,
gradually walking away
to the other side
of this dwindling road
hoping...
that I could still
make you stay, here
for a while.
So that I'll have
the chance to
see you smile
one last time.
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A poem I wrote after reading Love in the Time of Cholera by Gabriel Garcia Marquez. Not my best, really. It's just something I thought Florentino Ariza would say.
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Sounds like a good book thing.And a good poem to count.

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Thanks to Em-j-akahana for my great avvie!!!:hug:

Men cry not for themselves,but for their comrades...
FFVII Crisis Core.
simple.. pero kasing lakas ng gravitational pull..

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"Goodbyes may be worse at times when expressed with sorrow, guilt and a rose.."

~♥ :heart: ♥~
there's such a strong sense of longing come across here :heart:

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Dum spiro spero.
Glad you noticed. I just based this on the book. A lot of passion going on there. ^_^

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Some people say they haven't yet found themselves. But the self is not something one finds; it is something one creates.
Thanks! Yup, it was a good book even though the first 100 pages were dragging. LOL! XD

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Some people say they haven't yet found themselves. But the self is not something one finds; it is something one creates.
Salamat! :D

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Some people say they haven't yet found themselves. But the self is not something one finds; it is something one creates.
wow...sino yun?

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I just started to feel empty again...
I lost interest in everything...
I'm broken...
I'm down.
ouchy. painful poem.

the book's reported to be good, though. although the first few pages did seem boring so i couldn't bring myself to finish it. :P
No prob.Good enough to read again?

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Thanks to Em-j-akahana for my great avvie!!!:hug:

Men cry not for themselves,but for their comrades...
FFVII Crisis Core.

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