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Love Isn't Everything by ~something44:iconsomething44:



A boy has yearned for the love of a girl
Showing her that not all men are the same
Living in this ideal life, rolling in a twirl
The love the he shows, just waiting to be tamed

The boy has been tempted through several ways
Avoiding and preventing for the love to degrade
Seasons have laid waste, not minding what she says
The fear of being with another, just to get laid

A boy has preached for the beliefs that he trust
Waning and wailing for the girl to get the picture
Letting his heart open, splitting his emotions by thrust
With a knife in hand, driving himself into a fissure

The boy screamed out, sounding his word to heaven
Enduring a lot just to go on through this distance
Being loyal and crap to satisfy this mourning heathen
To make her believe the love of his own stance

A boy now journeys, turning to what love can bring
To be in her presence, the boy steadily wanders
Proving to her that the love they have isn’t everything
Waiting for the love to end, his heart silently ponders
©2007-2008 ~something44
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A poem I wrote for a friend who just recently broke up

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~pepperbacktroy:iconpepperbacktroy: Nov 9, 2007, 5:07:49 PM
my favorite so far. haha. *wink*

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you are the big rocket launcher and i'm just the shotgun
~something44:iconsomething44: Nov 9, 2007, 10:19:14 PM
thanks! See you around school. :thumbsup:

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~something44:iconsomething44: Nov 13, 2007, 9:13:53 AM Mood: Humor
Haha. Ngayon ko lang nagets miss. Yun usapan namin nina phil. Problema kasi naging totoo ang tula na ito para kay jensen! haha

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Ideas are more difficult to kill than people, but they can be killed, in the end.

Unleash your *RawEm0tion!
~sakurafairy24:iconsakurafairy24: Dec 6, 2007, 1:47:06 PM
really good!!!! i love the emotion and feeling you put into it =D

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"The worst possible way to miss a person, is to be sitting right next to someone knowing you cant have them"
~something44:iconsomething44: Dec 6, 2007, 5:37:47 PM
Why thank you. I'm glad you think so. :)

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Ideas are more difficult to kill than people, but they can be killed, in the end.

Unleash your *RawEm0tion!
~sakurafairy24:iconsakurafairy24: Dec 6, 2007, 6:24:47 PM
^^ your welcome...i really do?

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"The worst possible way to miss a person, is to be sitting right next to someone knowing you cant have them"
~something44:iconsomething44: Dec 6, 2007, 6:38:21 PM
Yup. This poem was written when I was drinking with my buddy. I put a lot of emotion into this because I've seen him cry like a baby. It's priceless! He never cries. Well, just this once. LOL

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Ideas are more difficult to kill than people, but they can be killed, in the end.

Unleash your *RawEm0tion!
~sakurafairy24:iconsakurafairy24: Dec 6, 2007, 6:53:17 PM
wow really?!? it must have been really hard for him. you must be a really good friend for him =)

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"The worst possible way to miss a person, is to be sitting right next to someone knowing you cant have them"
~something44:iconsomething44: Dec 6, 2007, 6:57:00 PM
Yup, it was hard for him. I don't really know about that, we just look out for each other. Hey, that's what friends are for.

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Ideas are more difficult to kill than people, but they can be killed, in the end.

Unleash your *RawEm0tion!