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Lady Love's Silhouette by ~something44:iconsomething44:

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Lady Love was such a fine bride,
A maiden which brings me such pride,
Griming with her dark aura in light
Of the wonders of love despite

The never-ending rambles about death,
A journey through my Lady Love’s silhouette,
As blood drips down her robust fishnet

Stockings…

Which brings me nothing but remorse,
As I stared down beneath her corpse,
Resting. Floating in a serene dream,
Where I kissed her for what may seem

To be my final time...

Of showing her true love’s affection,
As I lie in this awkward deception,
The morbidity of her lying corpse
Resting in this life’s course
Towards a brand new direction,

Where my Lady Love’s silhouette
Will be buried, burning her velvet
Robe as her grave begets

The end of the road…

As I reminisce the eerie shed of sweat,
Beneath my Lady Love’s silhouette.
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Some say that death is the end of the road, but there are others who believe that death is just a new beginning.

Part I of the “Love. Death. Resurrection.” Poetry series (the one I’ve stated in my journal). Three major symbols associated with the Scorpio zodiac sign. The series doesn’t necessarily concern with the Scorpio psyche but on human nature… Love, and being loved… Death, living life. Ending a never-ending story… Resurrection, denial and acceptance...
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~TornElf:iconTornElf: Feb 13, 2008, 7:09:43 AM
Why does the lady always have to die in poems... It's sad...

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To DO is to BE.
- Socrates
To BE is to DO.
- Plato
DOBEDOBEDO.
- Sinatra :boogie:

~bahayngfilipino :devPinay-Pinoy:
~Imperfected-Wisdom:iconImperfected-Wisdom: Feb 13, 2008, 8:00:51 AM
I think it's fantastic, then I've always been a lover of tragedy. It gives off it's solemn feeling during a painstaking rememberence, yet it still somehow seems gentle. Can't wait for the next part. :heart:
~Naminemidnight:iconNaminemidnight: Feb 13, 2008, 8:35:21 AM
Amen.WRITE MORE!It's sad and yet oh so meaningful.So which ones are associated with Gemini?
~something44:iconsomething44: Feb 13, 2008, 8:52:02 AM
Well, it's part of the story... but wait till tomorrow when I post the next part, "Death, Do Us Part". There's a twist to the series. ^_^

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Some people say they haven't yet found themselves. But the self is not something one finds; it is something one creates.
~something44:iconsomething44: Feb 13, 2008, 8:53:41 AM
Wow, glad you liked it. I wrote three poems for this series. The next part is my signature poem. I wrote 44 lines in it. Plus, the story has a twist. ^_^

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Some people say they haven't yet found themselves. But the self is not something one finds; it is something one creates.
~something44:iconsomething44: Feb 13, 2008, 8:56:11 AM
Thanks! I appreciate the support. ^_^... I've written three poems for this series... Well, I've never actually associated every part of the series to all the twelve signs of the zodiac... but I think you can find a reference to Gemini in the last part of the series. :)

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Some people say they haven't yet found themselves. But the self is not something one finds; it is something one creates.
~Imperfected-Wisdom:iconImperfected-Wisdom: Feb 13, 2008, 9:20:50 AM
Yay for twists! They make the literature world go round. : )
~something44:iconsomething44: Feb 13, 2008, 9:24:47 AM
They sure do. Haha. Actually there's a hint in this author's comment already. Concerning death. It signifies something. :D

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Some people say they haven't yet found themselves. But the self is not something one finds; it is something one creates.
~TornElf:iconTornElf: Feb 13, 2008, 9:45:50 AM
Really? Can't wait!

--
To DO is to BE.
- Socrates
To BE is to DO.
- Plato
DOBEDOBEDO.
- Sinatra :boogie:

~bahayngfilipino :devPinay-Pinoy:
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