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May you rest in peace
            Dear, you who holds my heart
let your lips falter
            into the cold ground
where I can muster
            your last breath of air
speaking my name
             fading into the black abyss
Dear you,
             may your soul rest tonight.


So that I can hold you
             once again, into the night
your body fresh,
             your blood staled by the wind
beaten and battered,
              decaying and shattered,
in time for your salvation
              oh what sweet redemption.

Stars glittering, clouds hovering
              above a hallow graveyard
where I can caress your hair
              even if I wouldn’t dare
kiss your lips,
              touch your lifeless body
Dear you,
              Let me hold you tonight.


Even if your body is bruised
              your lips wounded and used,
the glow of your eyes
              dwindling in the dark
savage nights, rough moments
              strangling your neck, beating
you down to the core,
              blood gushing, eyes popping,
your hands drenched
              with my bodily sweat,
cold and freezing
              the night’s silent hissing
Dear you,
             may your soul rest in my heart.
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"I answer the heroic question 'Death, where is thy sting?' with 'It is here in my heart and mind and memories.'"
- Maya Angelou

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:iconlogoistics086:
Love this! Flow and choice of words! Wonderful
You write from the heart...why I think it's so good.

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“Talent is God given. Be humble."
"Fame is man-given. Be grateful."
"Conceit is self-given. Be careful.”

-John Wooden
:iconarinaangel:
I love this, you truly have a talent. =)

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"There's nothing like you and I, so why do I even try?"
:icondueyoubelieve4:
wow.. you envoke such strong emotion with this. it's natural rythm catches attention so well. great job!!
:iconsomething44:
Why thank you! I wouldn't really it came from the heart, I sorta got the inspiration from hanging out in 4chan. You know the internet hooligans running around making fun of people for the lulz. XD

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Some people say they haven't yet found themselves. But the self is not something one finds; it is something one creates.
:iconsomething44:
Thank you! ^_^

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Some people say they haven't yet found themselves. But the self is not something one finds; it is something one creates.
:iconsomething44:
Thanks! I appreciate the comment. Very uplifting. :)

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Some people say they haven't yet found themselves. But the self is not something one finds; it is something one creates.
:iconlogoistics086:
no problem. you are very talented. Pls write more.
I really enjoyed your cmpany.

--
“Talent is God given. Be humble."
"Fame is man-given. Be grateful."
"Conceit is self-given. Be careful.”

-John Wooden
:iconarinaangel:
No problem. ^^

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"There's nothing like you and I, so why do I even try?"
:iconnaminemidnight:
Even more emotive poetry.Bravo.

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Thanks to Em-j-akahana for my great avvie!!!:hug:

Men cry not for themselves,but for their comrades...
FFVII Crisis Core.

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